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Post by JanayElli on Aug 5, 2006 14:40:37 GMT -5
The heavenly blue sky --------------------------- Have you ever noticed how beautiful our sky is, the clouds that puff like the cotton candy in my mouth. The sky has many beautiful sights that i'm sure you want to see, It may have shapes of people, places, or things. It produces rain which falls on our heads, when I feel the clouds let the rain out, I rise my head as it rains about. The heavenly blue sky is full of beautiful things, the birds fly across the sky and flap their wings. That's why I love the heavenly blue sky, and many people will reach the sky when it's time for them to die.
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Post by fallen~ on Aug 5, 2006 15:03:23 GMT -5
awwwww, that is really sweet *applauds* take a bow that was awesome *wipes a tear* and so sad....
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Post by JanayElli on Aug 5, 2006 15:32:46 GMT -5
awwwww, that is really sweet *applauds* take a bow that was awesome *wipes a tear* and so sad.... Oh thankyou so much! *bows*
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Post by Link the Hero on Aug 5, 2006 18:43:19 GMT -5
Hi Janay! It's me, Popuri Adorer! Great poem, it's beautiful!
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Post by Twilight Prince on Aug 6, 2006 14:02:31 GMT -5
Wow, Janay, that was a really beautiful poem!
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Post by Princess Janay on Aug 6, 2006 14:30:43 GMT -5
;DThank you guys so much! ;D Your so nice!
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Satty
Deku Tree Sprout
-Mangetsu no Teikai-
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Post by Satty on Aug 9, 2006 17:31:17 GMT -5
It's great and well written.
But it sounds more like a brochure then a poem, no offense. o.o
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Post by Princess Janay on Aug 9, 2006 18:59:11 GMT -5
Hmmm..maybe I should call it a brochure then.O_<
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